Hello my name is Red Snake. I love to eat wood especially when it’s from a clock. I have a story to tell you before I talk about that. I was slithering down the street and I saw a grandfather clock so I cycled it and ate some of it .I slithered down the street again and went back to the house and slithered under the door and went right to the clock .It was him up on the counters and it was a long way away. So I jumped on the handle and hopped on the counter and ate the wood.
Nice story. Did you cycle to the clock? Wow! You are a unique snake.
I wonder what happened to rest of the clock after you ate the wood? Is it till ticking or has it fallen apart?
You have weaved a cool story. What are your thoughts on peer editing to make it tighter?
Happy Writing.
Mrs. Trivedi-Ziemba (Team 100 WC, USA)
@TrivediZiemba
http://trivediziemba.edublogs.org/