¨ Mom what if I was in charge?¨ said Peyton ¨ In charge of what?¨ said mom. ¨ In charge of the whole world!¨ said Peyton. ¨ Hmm I don’t know, well it’s time to go to sleep I´ll see you in the morning.¨ said mom. As Peyton started to drift off into his sleep he had a dream. Peyton saw herself in a throne telling everybody what to do and what to get him. ¨ Get me some water!¨ demanded Peyton. King Peyton had a bad feeling about if he was not in charge anymore!
Hello,
I like how you used a dream so it sounded more realistic and its funny how you wanted to be in charge of the world.
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bye Charlie