100wc Garrett

There was once a man. He had the fear of snakes. The man read a red dictionary. He looked up the word clock. The text said, “Clock is an item used for telling the time. The arrows cycle around the clock. In conclusion, A CLOCK TELLS YOU THE  TIME!” The man watched the video his mom took of him when he fell into an open sewer pipe. He saw a red snake eating a picture of a mouse on a book.He saw the snake , The snake bit his eye, and he died. THE END. He hated snakes. bye.

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  1. Hi Garrett,
    I like that you’ve worked in all 5 words this week and that you’ve placed a quote correctly too. Wonderful! The second half of the paragraph was hard to connect to the first half. Maybe the man could look up the word snake and could discover that he liked learning about many kinds.
    Keep on writing!
    Mrs. Peterson (Team 100wc)
    Texas, USA

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